Breaking Free
2008 April 28
Standing on the edge of this life
I reach my hands out in front of me
My heart tugs at the familiar behind
I am alone
Yearning to taste of the newness
I dare to set the past behind
My lips part in a sweet goodbye
I am sullen
Gazing wide-eyed wonder far beyond
I hold my breath and listen
My pulse waits for the moment to arrive
I am silent
Trembling with anticipation and fear
I push forward breaking away
My life stumbles into colors and light
I am free
This is a part of Water Cooler Wednesday by Randy Elrod’s Ethos




Beautiful.
Did you write this?
Beautiful and creative!!! Thanks for adding to the conversation at the watercooler today!
Randy
I am the author of this little diddy. Just some words rambling around in my head. I’m glad you all enjoyed! Thanks!
Great poem. I likee.
lovely, emotional, uplifiting.
thanks
This is wonderful. Submit this to a publication somewhere. Thanks for the gift today.
I enjoyed this. More–we want more!!!
Wow, you all are too kind! This response is overwhelming for me. You all are such creative wonderful writers. Bless all of you!