Breaking Free

2008 April 28

Standing on the edge of this life

I reach my hands out in front of me

My heart tugs at the familiar behind

I am alone

 

Yearning to taste of the newness

I dare to set the past behind

My lips part in a sweet goodbye

I am sullen

  

Gazing wide-eyed wonder far beyond

I hold my breath and listen

My pulse waits for the moment to arrive

I am silent

 

Trembling with anticipation and fear

I push forward breaking away

My life stumbles into colors and light

I am free

 

 

 

This is a part of Water Cooler Wednesday by Randy Elrod’s Ethos

9 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 April 30

    Beautiful.

  2. 2008 April 30

    Did you write this?

    Beautiful and creative!!! Thanks for adding to the conversation at the watercooler today!

    Randy

  3. 2008 April 30

    I am the author of this little diddy. Just some words rambling around in my head. I’m glad you all enjoyed! Thanks!

  4. 2008 April 30

    Great poem. I likee.

  5. 2008 April 30

    lovely, emotional, uplifiting.
    thanks

  6. 2008 April 30

    This is wonderful. Submit this to a publication somewhere. Thanks for the gift today.

  7. 2008 April 30

    I enjoyed this. More–we want more!!!

  8. 2008 April 30

    Wow, you all are too kind! This response is overwhelming for me. You all are such creative wonderful writers. Bless all of you!

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